Editing Sample: Empirical Paper 2

Title: The Power Paradox: Giving Up Authority to Gain More Control as An Editor

Class: ELANG 350, Basic Copyediting, at Brigham Young University

Audience: Editors, authors, and people interested in editing

Comments about Editing: This paper was very clean, so there was little to fix. I made a few suggestions, though, and fixed what errors there were.

Special Considerations: I edited the style guide in Word using comments and track changes. This paper was still an incomplete draft, so making an developmental suggestions wasn’t as big of a concern.