Editing Sample: Empirical Paper 1

Title: Changing the Game: Turning Editing from Tug-of-War to Team Sport

Class: ELANG 350, Basic Copyediting, at Brigham Young University

Audience: Editors, authors, and people interested in editing

Comments about Editing: This paper was very clean, so there was little to fix. It was also still in an early draft phase, so any developmental of substantive editing was limited to a few suggestions offered at the end.

Special Considerations: I edited the style guide in Word using comments and track changes.